Dear Elena,
Hi! I was very happy when I
got your letter. How're you doing? it's been a long time since we last saw each other.
I'd love my college since the first day I came here, and I think you'll also like it. Here's full of nice people who can help you improve your english and also visit all the places you need to.
As soon as I got here I'd met a new friend, if you are as lucky as I was, you'll make a lot of friends very soon and they'll be with you every time you need them, if not you can be with us.
In free time, boys make football teams and play a tournament that last all the year. And girls have differents options of sports as volley, soccer and my favourite, hockey. And that's the sport that I play, so I hope you can join me. Also, people who don't like sports can relax by doing yoga or watching TV in the campus loby.
I love my english teacher, she's such a good person and she really knows how to reach each person as the way they need. This teacher has been giving classes since she was eighteen, and she has studied at the best college of the country. I think you'll like her and the school aswell.
As soon as I got here I'd met a new friend, if you are as lucky as I was, you'll make a lot of friends very soon and they'll be with you every time you need them, if not you can be with us.
In free time, boys make football teams and play a tournament that last all the year. And girls have differents options of sports as volley, soccer and my favourite, hockey. And that's the sport that I play, so I hope you can join me. Also, people who don't like sports can relax by doing yoga or watching TV in the campus loby.
I love my english teacher, she's such a good person and she really knows how to reach each person as the way they need. This teacher has been giving classes since she was eighteen, and she has studied at the best college of the country. I think you'll like her and the school aswell.
I hope I can meet you soon! Best wishes, Tom.
Your letter is well written and organized. You have covered every point in the task and you sound persuasive too.
ResponderEliminarI think your 3rd paragraph is quite harsh: "If you are as lucky as I was (...) if not you can be with us." That sounds as if you´d rather she made other friends than hang out with you! It doesn´s sound very friendly!
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